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-ಜೋಯ್ ಲೋಬೊ, ಬೊಳಿಯೆ

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ದೆಕುನ್...

 

 

 

 

ತಾಣಿ ಸವಾಲ್ ಕೆಲೆಂ
ಮಾಗ್ಚೆಂ ಕಿತ್ಯಾಕ್ ಸೊಡ್ಲೆಯ್?
ಅನಿ ಆರ್ಗಾ ದಿವ್ಚೆಂ ಕಿತ್ಯಾಕ್ ಧರ್ಲೆಯ್?
ಥೊಡೆ ಪಾವ್ಟಿ ಹೆಂ ಸವಾಲ್ ಮಕಾಯ್ ಧೊಸ್ತಾ
ಪುಣ್ ಉಪ್ಕಾರಿ ಮೊನ್ ಕಾಳಿಜ಼್ ಭರ್ತಾಂ


 
ಕಿತ್ಯಾಕ್ ಥೊಡೆ ಭುಕೆತಾನಾ, ಥೊಡೆ ತಾಂಚ್ಯಾಂತ್ಲೆ ವಾಂಟೆ ಕರ್ತಾತ್,
ಎಕ್ಲೊ ತಾನೆತಾನಾ, ಆನೆಕ್ಲೊ ಬಾಂಯ್ ಖೊಂಡ್ತಾ,
ಎಕ್ಲೊ ಹೊಗ್ಡಯ್ತಾನಾ, ಆನೆಕ್ಲೊ ಸೊದ್ತಾಂ


 
ಹೊ ಗೊಂದೊಳ್ ಸಂಸಾರ್,
ಹ್ಯಾ ಕಾಳೊಕಾಚ್ಯಾ ಸಂಸಾರಾಂತ್
ದೆವಾಚೆಂ ಮುಖಾಮೊಳ್ ಪರ್ಜಾಳ್ತಾ,
ಕಷ್ಟಾ ಮಧೆಂ, ಥೊಡೆ ಅನಿಕೀ ಜತನ್ ಘೆತಾತ್,
ಅನಿ ದೆವಾಚಿ ಆಜಾಪಾ ಘಡ್ತಾತ್

  

 

 

 

  

 

 

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Comments on this Article
Lavina Mathias, Udupi Mon, March-14-2016, 7:05
Nice poem very meaningful. Keep it up.
Ronald Sabi, Moodubelle Tue, March-8-2016, 10:55

Keep it up Joy Lobo!

Victor Castelino, Boliye/Dubai Fri, March-4-2016, 1:08

"ತಾಣಿ ಸವಾಲ್ ಕೆಲೆಂಮಾಗ್ಚೆಂ ಕಿತ್ಯಾಕ್ ಸೊಡ್ಲೆಂಯ್?
ಅನಿ ಆರ್ಗಾಂ ದಿವ್ಚೆಂ ಕಿತ್ಯಾಕ್ ಧರ್ಲೆಂಯ್?
ಥೊಡೆ ಪಾವ್ಟಿಂ ಹೆಂ ಸವಾಲ್ ಮಕಾಯ್ ಧೊಸ್ತಾ
ಪುಣ್ ಉಪ್ಕಾರಿ ಮೊನ್ ಕಾಳಿಜ಼್ ಭರ್ತಾ


ಕಿತ್ಯಾಕ್ ಥೊಡೆ ಭುಕೆತಾನಾ, ಥೊಡೆ ತಾಂಚ್ಯಾಂತ್ಲೆ ವಾಂಟೆ ಕರ್ತಾತ್,
ಎಕ್ಲೊ ತಾನೆತಾನಾ, ಆನೆಕ್ಲೊ ಬಾಂಯ್ ಖೊಂಡ್ತಾ,
ಎಕ್ಲೊ ಹೊಗ್ಡಯ್ತಾನಾ, ಆನೆಕ್ಲೊ ಸೊದ್ತಾ


ಹೊ ಗೊಂದೊಳ್ ಸಂಸಾರ್,
ಹ್ಯಾ ಕಾಳೊಕಾಚ್ಯಾ ಸಂಸಾರಾಂತ್
ದೆವಾಚೆಂ ಮುಖಾಮೊಳ್ ಪರ್ಜಾಳ್ತಾ,
ಕಷ್ಟಾ ಮಧೆಂ, ಥೊಡೆ ಅನಿಕೀ ಜತನ್ ಘೆತಾತ್,
ಅನಿ ದೆವಾಚಿ ಆಜಾಪಾಂ ಘಡ್ತಾತ್"

Earlier there was a suggestion to Joy Lobo to pay attention to grammer and if possible request some one to check before publishing. Above I have corrected some grammer mistakes without his permission hoping he and the readers would agree with me. May be I am wrong in correcting his writing. Request readers opinion. Good one Joy. Keep it up.

Loelo Boliye, Moodubelle Thu, March-3-2016, 3:05
Amith Clive Dsouza, Yeregaavye kirikiri, undu ragaale ijji. Pudar change malpuni, comment paaduni :)
Wilfred Fernandes, Riyadh Wed, March-2-2016, 10:12
Meaningful poem, narrated beutifully. Good luck Joy Lobo. You have the flair of writing
Amith Clive Dsouza, Moodubelle / bangalore Tue, March-1-2016, 7:49
Joy baab, boren chinthaap, nazuuk uthraan and sobith kavan. Porbim thuka. Amacha boliyecha lokaak hi kavana somzathaathgi. Picnic ani desert safari sodun dusre kai thari vaschi sovai thanka asagi. Thukha dhon shabhaskechi uthran borovnk thanka kai time asa. Devess boliyegarank sambhalun vorundi. Pun thu borovenche raivoinaka
Ronson Aranha, Dubai Tue, March-1-2016, 2:39
Dear Joy, nice poem. You are improving day by day. Hope Belle people will support and encourage your talent
Johnson Philip Barboza, Moodubelle Tue, March-1-2016, 10:37
Joy you always pick up nice subjects in your poem. You are doing good and you are one of the most promising poets in Konkani. Do write more and we love to read your poems
John, mangalore Tue, March-1-2016, 10:31
Great joy, keep going further steps
Raphael Menezes, Kallianpura Tue, March-1-2016, 10:08
Beautiful poem Joy Lobo. This shows the reality of world and Gods love towards mankind. Wish to see more poems from you
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